Fear has strangled me
Bound up by thought, the Coward
Seeks escape through this
17.10.14
First line was good, it went downhill from there though. Could be re-worked, I suppose. The "this" on line 3 is particularly weak.
17.10.14
First line was good, it went downhill from there though. Could be re-worked, I suppose. The "this" on line 3 is particularly weak.
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